Idea draft essay 5

  1. Describe personal changes of each other
    • Persepolis
      • Cultural change during the islamic Revolution 
        • the veil is one of the most common objects represented in Iranian culture 
        • leaders of the islamic revolution forced women to wear a veil 
        • becomes a social value 
        • for Satrapi it is a loss of identity and freedom 
        • western culture shows satrapy with rock band posters and her sense of style 
        • shows her personal identity 
        • she embraces both cultures
        • she refuses to be talked down upon for example in school, she has been expelled many times
    • Gloria Anzaluda

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